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eBadger

Well, sure!  Fan art is where all the really pervy stuff is at. 

Hexed

#26
I am alive! Somewhat. :D

Just to prove that I'm actually working on a character here's what I have so far. And some questions I have.

Character Description:
Name:Litek
Sex: Male
Build: Thick
Height: 6' 5"
Skin tone: Medium Tan
Hair color: Short cut (ear length) Black hair
Beard: Black Stubble
Breast/cock size: Average

Appearance
The heavily built male stands at over six feet in height, his tanned skin lending him a darker appearance. Hair the color of a starless night crowns his head in a wild mop that comes down to his ears, a thin smattering of the same dark locks crossing his chin and cheeks. Light blue eyes peer out from above a crooked nose that's obviously been broken a time or two.

Dense shoulders curve along thick arms, shiny burn marks dancing along his tanned flesh all the way to the tips of his long fingers. 


Personality
At first glance he comes off as quite serious and quiet, his large size perhaps adding a touch of menace to his silence. Once he's grown to know someone they'll find he has a perhaps unhealthy fondness for pranks and dirty jokes. Of course introduce him to some new piece of blacksmithing or mechanical contraption and he'll chat your ear off as he tries to figure out how it was done or works.



Background
Born in a simple village to a large family of farmers. Given the size of the family he only stayed with them till he could walk and work before being apprenticed out to the village's blacksmith, whom had a single daughter and no sons. Years of the heavy work hauling coal and pounding metal into it's shape forged a strong body for him while at the same time his master passed on a great love for molding metal and learning all the secrets it holds. Many were the nights spent by the blacksmith, his daughter, and Litek scribbling in charcoal strange and complex designs that ranged from puzzle toys to grand vaults, and while much of the designs were left unfinished due to lack of time or materials the three did produce many complex and small pieces. As things were Litek's life would have continued mostly unchanging if it weren't for a single incident. Litek, returning late one night to the village after having journeyed to a large city to sell metal novelties to the more wealthy people heard the cry of a woman. Moving towards the noise he found one of the village girls pinned down by a male figure that was in the process of stripping her clothing off. Stopping the attempted rape by the simple method of pounding the would be rapist into the ground he brought both to the village to turn in the criminal only to find out the male was the village chief's only son. Only days later no one was surprised when Litek was "chosen" to be that years champion.


Writing Sample/Prologue
The sun was well on it's way through the sky and with it came the temperatures of summer, an oppressive heat that mingled with the dry air. Instead of working the fields or using the light to get things done the people of the village have gathered together to celebrate the choosing of a new Champion, although given the thick leather cords binding said Champion's wrists behind his back there's no telling just how much honor was involved.

Litek's large form was clad in a simple and thick tunic and legging set, the brown cloth marred with numerous burns and patches. No words or noise slipped from him as he kneeled before the cave, his head down with slow and even breaths shaking his form. As the chief's long speech finally came to an end his head lifted and his eyes focused on the crowd, a crowd filled with a surprising number of pitchforks and lumber axes at that. With a sad yet happy smile on his lips he finally met his master's gaze, the giant of a man cradling a massive hammer in his hands. Keeping his gaze upon his master Litek slowly stands up, the binds creaking around his wrists. Offering a shake of his head he finally lets his gaze drop to the slender form of his master's daughter, eyes burning as he tries to memorize every bit of her.

Finally he turns around to face the cave, the heavy boots covering his feet thumping across the ground as he moves into it. A few minutes of unsteady walking and he arrived before the shimmering portal, the strange ripple in the air bright as it ever gets. A small laugh slips from him as his wrists are roughly released, the chief's son stepping into view as he hands over a battered and partially emptied backpack. One hand reaches out to firmly grasp the pack before his other rocks forward to slam into the man's face, the loud crunch of a broken nose filling the cave as Litek walks into the portal with a smile on his lips and blood on his hand.



Ons/Offs (Format Stolen from VonDoom!)
Liked Creature Encounters
Succubi! Other demons if/when turned female.
Goblins.
Most of the 'companions' Katherine, Amily, and the swamp dragon girl (Sadly I lost my saves and haven't gotten her again.)

Transformation Preferences
Will honestly admit if I play male I go almost full dragon while female characters become goblin sized cat girls. That said I don't mind random transformations, and losing the one's I don't like makes for a nice quest.

Fetishes
Transformation
Light Bondage
Some Non-consent
Feminization (As all my playthrough Rubi's can attest.)
Lactation
Cum Addiction
Massive amounts of Cum/Spermplay
Group Sex
Voyeur/Exhibitionism

Offs
Ungainly sexual characteristics. (Urta's a wonderful NPC but fuck if her dick isn't just to big.)
Extreme pain (Spanking is good, whipping is not good.)
Scat/piss play

Character Sheet:

High Concept
Sturdy Blacksmith Apprentice

Trouble
Oh! Shiny Metal!

Aspects
Gifted Molder of Metal
Blank
Human: Is a standard human male

Approaches
Careful:2
Clever:2
Flashy:0
Forceful:3
Quick:1
Sneaky:1

Fate Points
Refresh:3

Stunts
Because my body is like Iron, I get a (+2 forceful) defense when I try to withstand attacks.


Alright. Questions.

1. I know it mentions being chosen as a champion but does each village have a champion or is it each world?  And if it's each village then do/can the characters know each other in some way?

2. Right now the idea is adopted son of his town's blacksmith, his parents simply having been taken by illness or having to many kids to support on their own. So he's something of a crafter that can hit really hard. Is that a decent concept or are/were you looking for something else? Or perhaps does the group as it is need something else.

3. I had a question about the content in the game but can't remember it. :D  So. How much of a... choice do we have in the characters transformations? Can we specifically look for certain items or whatever causes the transformation?      Asked mostly because in CoC even if I started male that didn't last long so as to enjoy all the content of the game.

Welp. There he is. Nitpick and laugh to your hearts content. :) 

Videospirit

#27
Character Description: 

Name: Alex Stout
Sex: Male
Build: Thick
Height: 5'11
Skin tone: light
Hair color: short blonde hair
Beard: Clean shaven
cock size: average.

Appearance
Alex is not short, standing at 5'11, but he is unmistakeably huge as thin and wiry are not words that could be used to describe him. He obviously has had no shortage of nutrition growing up as his bulging muscles are covered in fair healthy skin. He looks at the world with blue hungry eyes that show no hints of restraint, giving most women the feeling he is swallowing them with his eyes but his stance shows little signs of acting on such thoughts. His hair is kept short, and a little ragged as if he cuts it himself without much talent, especially short near his eyes. 

Personality
Alex is a bully through and through. He has two things he likes, food and women, and he's not subtle about expressing these desires. Men are seen as obstacles that need to be taught there place, or threats that need to be avoided. He is fiercely protective of all women, although he has unreasonable expectations of reward of any woman he feels owes him a favour.  In his own mind, despite everything else, he sees himself as the hero and anyone who interferes with him is practically a criminal for getting in the hero's way.

Background
Alex was an orphan raised in a militant church where he was brought up to be a knight protector. He was the largest of the knight candidates, and had no qualms throwing his weight around to take a larger portion of the meager meals the orphanage provided. In a normal orphanage he might have been considered a problem child but in this one his love of bullying the other knight candidates was used to in the words of their arms master "Toughen the brats up". So it's little surprise that he came to take it for a given that it was okay for him to bully the weak and take anything he wanted for himself.

It only got worse when he reached puberty and suddenly found a new interest in the opposite sex. There were no women in the knight orphanage though, and so he kept trying to sneak out of the church grounds and play around in the nearby town. The priests were not of the mind to beat him into behaving, so they tried a different approach and put him into intensive study every time he tried to sneak out, listening to heroic tales of damsels in distress and romance.

Alex wasn't too clever though, and what he got out of it was that women were precious and needed to be protected. And also that saving them from danger meant they owed you and it was apparently okay to have sex as a reward. The priests probably should have screened out the bawdy tales a little better.

Still, it did serve the purpose of keeping Alex from just assaulting any woman he pleased and he managed to finish his knight training. There were a few incidents with peasant girls coming across trouble only to be "rescued" by him, but they were few and far between. It was when by some strange stroke of fate he ended up "rescuing" his kingdom's princess that he quickly found himself assigned to head into the portal to face the demons.

Writing Sample/Prologue
Alex stared at the portal somewhat irately. What a blunder the past several weeks had been. It had all started out with an assassin targeting the princess while he was visiting the castle to deliver a message and when he'd heroically saved the day and was started to get familiar with the princess... well she was still a bit upset from the assassination attempt which left her somewhat hysterical. She may have shrieked a little which lead the others nearby to think he was assaulting her or doing something she didn't like. They locked him in the dungeon. Well... naturally after talking the idiots guarding him's ears off they eventually caved to his persistence and got the mess all sorted out. They even decided to reward him by naming him a champion... or something along those lines. Alex wasn't exactly sure what he was a champion of, but he got the gist of it. A hero such as himself was destined for greater things, so they were sending him to a different world where his many talents could be put to better use.

Still... there must have been some mix up in the paperwork, they'd kept him shackled the entire way to the portal and they hadn't even returned his templar armour or equipment back to him. Did they expect him to beat the demons into submission with his bare hands? This incompetence had not gone unnoticed, and Alex had been lecturing his escorts about their many failings the entire way there. Now that he was finally at the portal one of his escorts looked at him for a moment slightly incredulously before his face suddenly became very animated and energetic as he began shouting out about misremembering his orders and quickly having Alex's bindings removed. Said it was a terrible embarrassment and offered Alex a meal at his own expense while they waited for his equipment to arrive.

The food tasted kind of funny to Alex, but he knew the escort was incompetent so it was little surprise that he had no sense of taste either. Alex finished what he could, but he must have been pretty tired because he found it impossible to stay awake and dozed off about halfway through the meal.

And that was the last he saw of his world.


Ons/Offs
Specifically pertaining to CoC-specific fetishes.
On:
Corruption. Slowly growing to lust for power, corruption, until the very heart is dyed in the colors of evil. Delicious.
Transformation, mental and physical. Transformation of bodily fluids into tastier forms, becoming sexier and sluttier. Turning into a being the requires sex to function. Transformation as a means of corruption is best. The form should not make Sex painful though. Also genderbending is great.
Mind/arousal control/addiction. Implanted fetishes and desires, spells to get the loins frothing, aphrodisiacs ... For the strong willed
Sexy Monster people (Monstergirl-esque, so all with strong human characteristics). Succubi and Omnibi, cowgirls, dragons/salamander, witches, naga, slime ...
lactation is amazing on female/futanari characters.


Off: None of these prevent me from playing, but I cannot find these erotic at all
Multiple sex organs. One extra dick is a little weird but neat, a bunch of tentacles is okay,  but four dicks, three breasts and five vaginas is nothing but weird.
Extreme proportions. If the breasts are too big, they can't be played with properly. Also giant cocks are painful.
Inflation, not sexy.
Anything that belongs in the bathroom.
Pain during intimacy.
Sex without at least 1 female.


Character Sheet: 

High Concept: Former Knight Protector of the militant church

Trouble: Thinks with his loins

Aspects: Truly believes women are weak and need to be protected
So gluttonous he's unstoppable when food is on the line
You remain human, with all the benefits and limitations that implies.

Approaches
Careful +2
Clever +0
Flashy +1
Forceful +3
Quick +2
Sneaky +1

Fate Points: 3
Refresh: 3

Stunts
Because I am a glutton with no shame, once per chapter I can locate something possibly transformative to eat, no matter where I am.
Because I won't take no for an answer, I get a +2 when I forcefully seduce someone I've rescued from danger or imprisonment.

eBadger

Hexed - Looking good so far!

1. I'm not envisioning the portals to be a regular sort of thing.  Some worlds may have many; others only one.  So no, it's not each village, but if you wanted to refer to another portal nearby that would be fine.  Or lemme know what you're thinking of and we'll figure it out.  Actually, I don't expect this game to touch on your original worlds much/at all, so do whatever you want.  My only sticking point is that magic is very rare, because I want your characters to have some 'holy shit, what's going on?' sort of adventures, cave men running across pistols, rather than looking at a thing and saying 'gee whiz, this casts a fireball but would make my dick vanish'. 

2. I'm very open to concepts, and that's perfectly fine.  As I've mentioned before, I think people are seeing this as a bit more hack and slash than I'm envisioning, but even that's fine: we'll skew a bit more toward battles and if you lose a few of the social engagements...well, again, losing now and then in this game is sort of half the point, right?  I will say that I can see a crafter doing very well in Mareth. 

3. I will give the vague answer, "some."  One thing I'm doing in this game - I've planned on starting it for a while, before I even saw CoC - is to include a "Craving: ______" line in everyone's header, up with their character name, tagging, etc.  It won't always happen, I have a plot to deal with (once I finish putting one together!) and I want things to make sense (the minotaur is not going to turn you into a bunny girl without a very solid explanation) but yeah, I'll work with you guys. 

Also, if your characters are seeking something IC, that's totally a thing.  Maybe Litek gets a gender swap and wants his prick back, so he asks around the local village about how to do that and gets a pill to grow one, ending up futa.  You'll also have the in-game option at times to do things like try out the odd peppers the dog-people like so much, knowing the potential results, just as in CoC. 

However, there will also be some 'shit happens' sort of stuff.  I'll of course respect Offs, but consequences are the FAE version of wounds/damage and some of them are going to be bad things your character will struggle through/get over.  Your characters are going to be bound, raped, impregnated, transformed, addicted, humiliated, whipped, groped, or just about anything else that comes to mind - hopefully all of that will be fun to endure!

LunaLilith22

Hi, just figured I'd post this here as I'm almost done, I can't find a picture that fits the description I have already made so I might switch the appearance around to fit a picture. I am going to put a bit more into the backstory and need to write the prologue but other than that I think I'm done unless I missed something.
Lilith's Description & Backstory stuffs

Name
Lilith

Gender
Male

Build
Girly

Height
5'11

Skin Tone
Fair

Beard
None

Hair Color
Brown, medium

Cock Size
Small

Breast Size
Average

Description:
Lilith stands out from other women due to her height, though she always stands up straight so her breasts don't look small. Her slightly curvacious build, lack of a noticeable adam's apple and fair skin help her in passing as female. She isn't as voluptuous as she wishes she could be but there is no way to fix that outside of the world of Mareth so she tries to be grateful for what femininity she has. Her pert pinkish red lips, her cute button nose, soft silky skin and the long lashes that encircle the blue eyes that constantly asses her surroundings and those in it are her pride and she takes care to ensure she looks good as much of the time as she can.

Lilith has plucked her brows into a feminine shape so many times that the excess hair eventually stopped growing, she is fortunate to have had similar luck with what little facial hair she had. The hair on her head is usually kept in a loose ponytail and her bangs are cut just above her eyebrows to keep it out of her eyes, when let down it is straight and stops just above her shoulders. Her voice is light and feminine from years of pretending to be female.

Personality:
Lilith is guarded and very concerned for her privacy, to the point that she is likely to sleep on the outskirts of camp away from the others. Though she doesn't reveal much about herself she does take a keen interest in others, often trying to get them to talk about themselves so she can figure out what makes them tick. She tries not to use the knowledge she learns to manipulate people unless she sees no other option. She is often seen as the quiet, nurturing woman by others and some mistake her kindness for weakness, she doesn't let people walk all over her and usually tries to handle it in a civil manner if possible. She doesn't often make promises, usually wording it as "I'll try" rather than "I will" and on the few occasions where she does promise something she does her very best to see it through.

Background:
Lilith was originally from a different village, her mother never told her who her father was or why when they moved to a new village she had to dress like a girl and have her name changed. At this point she can't even remember her old name, just that there was a time when she was called something other than Lilith. When moving to this new village her mother had her pretend to be a girl, she claimed it was because Lilith looked so much cuter as a girl but Lilith has come to suspect ulterior motives as she got older. Sadly for Lilith her mother took ill last harvest season and perished soon after. Now she has no way of asking her why she is trying to move on and ignore the inconsistencies in her past, to a varying degree of success. She thought about revealing herself to the village as a male but after careful consideration she decided that she preferred presenting as a woman. She had been an assistant to the alchemist of the village, paying close attention and showing a natural talent for it that made the old man eager to  teach her. When she couldn't prevent her mother's passing she took it as a personal failure and vowed to find a way to protect the ones she loves.

On/Off

On:
Anal
Hermaphrodites
Giving oral
Bondage
Domination/submission, as she becomes more corrupt she will find joy in both of these activities
Transformation, I'd like to see her go from being the guarded girly boy to being a vibrant lusty woman  (not 100% sure exactly what physical transformations I want her to have as of yet, but I find myself leaning heavily towards the draconic ones) who embraces her darkest desires. 
Corruption, I want to see her lust for power drive her to new levels of depravity as she forfeits her old ideals for new ones that better match the ways of this realm, though some of her more core ideals will remain in place.
Monster people (Monstergirl-esque, so all with strong human characteristics). Succubi and Omnibi, dragons/salamander, sharkgirls, naga, slime/goo girls etc...
Mind/arousal control. Implanted fetishes and desires to get her where I want her to be (sadist/masochist, voyeurism, non-con) spells to get the loins frothing, aphrodisiacs...
Cum-Addiction, is something I plan on having her wrestle with at some point, It's part of what will spark her depravity and mold her into the being I want her to become

Off:
Multiple sex organs. One extra dick is fine, a bunch of tentacles is great,  but four dicks, three breasts and five vaginas is just weird.
Extreme proportions. Large is good, but people still need to be able to move.
Inflation, not sexy.
Weird nipples. Fuckable nipples, cock nipples, 'lipples'. Not really my thing.
Corruptive parasites, she'll become corrupt enough on her own and there will be plenty of things inside her, she won't need something inside her to corrupt her

Character Sheet
High Concept.  Flirty Alchemist's Apprentice

Trouble. Excessive Libido

Further Aspects.
Hiding Her Cock
Human: You remain human, with all the benefits and limitations that implies.

Approaches
Careful: 2
Clever: 2
Flashy: 3
Forceful: 0
Quick: 1
Sneaky: 1

Stunts
Because I have practiced suggestive dancing I gain a +2 bonus when Flashily seducing someone

Refresh
3

VonDoom

Quote from: eBadger on April 11, 2015, 12:10:37 AM
Hexed - Looking good so far!

2. I'm very open to concepts, and that's perfectly fine.  As I've mentioned before, I think people are seeing this as a bit more hack and slash than I'm envisioning, but even that's fine: we'll skew a bit more toward battles and if you lose a few of the social engagements...

:'( Social engagements best.
Now this is the Law of the Jungle-
as old and as true as the sky;
And the Wolf that shall keep it may  prosper,
but the Wolf that shall break it must die.

-Rudyard Kipling, "The Law of the Jungle"
O&O

Zaer Darkwail

Quote from: VonDoom on April 11, 2015, 12:52:36 AM
:'( Social engagements best.

Well, my char is heavily 'combat focus' because he expects to be fighting a endless tide of demons and he is focused heavily to combat (so that's his weakness; lack of versatility). Socially he is not suave or skilled and also his trouble is that if someone bears corruption (but is not evil) then his self-righteous attitude gets him to trouble as his blind hatred for demons/corruption would make him not socialize nor make deals with people.

But I do not intent he sticks as such; as my strong on is corruption/transformation and so my char will change for sure over time. Anycase edited my sheet bit on stunts area.

Paladin101

Name: Anton Ramondu
Sex: Male (for now....)
Build: Lean
Height 5'8"
Skin tone: Fair
Hair color: Blonde
Beard: Smooth as a baby's bottom, just how the ladies like it
Breast/cock size: 7 inch cock

Appearance
Anton is a average sized man with a lean, smoothly muscled body. He keeps himself toned and supple, focusing on speed of movement over strength. He wears black leather pants, a bit snugger than some may suggest, a white cotton shirt, swashbuckler style, all billowy with big sleeves and a neck that he leaves untied to expose his hairless chest. He wears a bright blue sash around his waist and a blue vest, with knee high leather boots and a broad brimmed hat which he has stuck a blue feather into and pinned up on one side, before perching it upon his head at a jaunty angle.

Personality
Anton is a mischievous rogue, a charmer and a ladies man. He is very hedonistic, living for the moment and taking any and all pleasures he can find. He does wish to help people, thus why he volunteered to become a champion for his village. But he wishes to suck as much pleasure from life as he can when he isn't doing good deeds.

Background
Anton was an orphan from the age of six. His parents died of disease, and he found himself cast adrift, as they died in a city far from those they called family. He found himself taken in by a group of young thieves, and quickly discovered that being fast on your feet was just as good as being strong. So he learned to move fast, honing his reactions, being ever alert, and developing a sharp tongue and clever wit as a result of being able to frequently outrun trouble. As he grew, he eventually decided he no longer wished to be a thief, didn't wish to live in the streets. He managed to book passage upon a boat, signing up to serve as a deckhand. It was on his first voyage that he first saw pirates, and the flashy swordsmanship and fast footwork of a swashbuckler.

He managed to convince the swashbuckler he had seen to train him, and has spent the last five years studying the sword and learning the art of dueling. When the call went out for a champion to represent their city, Anton stepped forward, hoping to find new challenges and adventures beyond.

Writing Sample/Prologue

"Anton! Wait!" A red haired woman implored, holding the blanket up to cover her nakedness as Anton buckled his swordbelt over his slim hips. He tilted his head and swept his hand through his flowing blonde hair before stepping back towards the bed.

"Ah, my dear, you know it isn't fair for you to throw around demands when you are so pleasantly pink and nude before me. How can I resist obeying?" He murmured as he leaned down to capture her lips with his own in a gentle embrace, his hand lifting to cup her cheek before he stepped back. "But you know I have to go. They await me at the portal. If I don't go who knows what random soul will be chucked through! You gave me a night to remember, let's not spoil it with long farewells." He told her grandly as he settled his hat upon his head at a jaunty angle, a roguish smile upon his face as he moved for the door.

"But...what if I get pregnant? Don't you love me? I thought you said you wouldn't go last night!" She asked desperately as she knelt in the bed, letting the blanket fall from her pleasing curves.

"I do love you, as I have loved many woman my dear. If you get pregnant, make certain if it's a boy that he learns to fight, and if a girl that she knows how to make love. Either way my dear, I truly must be going." He said with a last doffing of his hat, and a closing of the door to her shrieks of anger.

"Well. That could have gone better." He muttered as he headed for the portal.

Ons/Offs
Anything goes except for vore/gore, or bathroom shit. Whole point of this setting is the off the wall sexual shite that happens. Though as long as he has only manly parts, he is unlikely to voluntarily engage in any man on man or man on futa(where he is catching) action. Not to say he can't be forced if he loses a battle though...

Character Sheet: 

High Concept: Swashbuckling Rogue

Trouble: Impulsive, he will often leap into a situation before he realizes how hard it will be to get out alive, or uncorrupted.

Aspects

1: Seducer of Women: Anton has been a womanizer since he found out that they have different parts. As such, he is experienced in the wooing of ladies.
2:
3: Human: You remain human, with all the benefits and limitations that implies.

Approaches

Careful: 0
Clever: 2
Flashy: 2
Forceful: 1
Quick : 3
Sneaky : 1

Fate Points

Refresh

Stunts

Quick Footwork: As a master duelist accustomed to fencing and squaring off against a single foe, when facing one enemy he gains +2 Quick to land his blows first.

Clever Tongue: The ladies enjoy a good story, and pleasing words, and Anton has learned to give them what they want. +2 Clever when trying to charm a female.

Dazzling Swordplay: Taking an entire turn to engage in an intricate, fanciful sword routine he gets a +2 Flashy to defend against the next attack.

SloppyJoe

Though my character doesn't have many skill outside of warfare, I hope he is balanced well enough, maybe there can be an opportunity IC to learn a crafting skill or a social skill as the third aspect...

I'm thinking of giving him a third stunt to help out in the socializing department. :/
Some people simply can't handle the heat, me? I like to
play with fire. So what if I get burned, it's just another
scar to add to the collection.

Videospirit

Since most are adding multiple stunts I added a second one to Alex.

SloppyJoe

On stunts; is the +number supposed to just be two, or is it supposed to be based off of the number assigned the appointed approach?
Some people simply can't handle the heat, me? I like to
play with fire. So what if I get burned, it's just another
scar to add to the collection.

eBadger

LunaLilith, how are you thinking to end up in Mareth - as a champion, or kidnapped by the demons?  Looking very good, post your sample when you have it!

Quote from: VonDoom on April 11, 2015, 12:52:36 AM
:'( Social engagements best.

I've sorted out the over-arcing concept, and there will be plenty of opportunity for bloody battles to the death or social interplay.  Most of it will simply depend upon how you guys choose to approach things.  I'm just stating that if characters choose to go in swinging, things will swing back, and you champions are FAR from the scariest things in Mareth.  But even that's fine: again, losing a battle doesn't mean death.  Most things have much better uses for you than that.  And just like the game, my intention is that winning every interaction is not the funnest way to go through this roleplay. 

Quote from: SloppyJoe on April 12, 2015, 05:13:34 AM
Though my character doesn't have many skill outside of warfare, I hope he is balanced well enough

Even in normal system games I place very little value on balance (imbalanced characters and groups are often the most fun to play, as long as everyone accepts that struggling with their shortcomings is fun).  Characters are being judged primarily on being interesting. 

Quote from: SloppyJoe on April 13, 2015, 01:27:41 AM
On stunts; is the +number supposed to just be two, or is it supposed to be based off of the number assigned the appointed approach?

Stunts should be written per the provided format, just filling in for the items in [brackets]. 

QuoteBecause I [describe some way that you are exceptional, have a cool bit of gear, or are otherwise awesome], I get a +2 when I [pick one: Carefully, Cleverly, Flashily, Forcefully, Quickly, Sneakily][pick one: attack, defend, create advantages, overcome] when [describe a circumstance].

-OR-

QuoteBecause I [describe some way that you are exceptional, have a cool bit of gear, or are otherwise awesome], once per chapter I can [describe something cool you can do].




So as things currently stand: 

Sloppy Joe - Jo Libhaft, Wildcard Ex-Militant
Miroque - Acolyte Aishah Demel, of the Thrice Blessed Goddess
VonDoom - Marissa, Studious Witch Apprentice
Zaer Darkwail - Victor Blade, Crusading Seeker
Hexed - Litek, Sturdy Blacksmith Apprentice
-Need Background & Prologue
Videospirit - Alex Stout, Former Knight Protector of the militant church
LunaLilith22 - Lilith, Flirty Alchemist's Apprentice
-Needs prologue, preferably picture
Paladin101 - Anton Ramondu, Swashbuckling Rogue

By PM:
ThatOneShrroth, Dancer
-Need everything
Vercile - Elwyn Ainsborough, Bow-Wielding Light Mage
-Need personality/background/prologue



A good amount of interest overall!  I'll give a couple more days for submissions and to let people finish up their characters, but if there's any more interest out there it's definitely getting down to crunch time. 

VonDoom

Something to keep in mind for the more combative characters.    ;)

When one grapples succubi, go right for the pin
No, do not linger in the clinch, it's not a fight you'll win
Don't kiss the supple demoness, as from you your strength drains
And grinning, she will sup her fill, and discard what remains
So, when you grapple succubi, try coming from behind
And, quickly, now, control the head, of beauty most unkind
And keep those luscious lips well clear, of all your flesh, my son
They're simply just too perilous, for all they seem like fun

-Found on the Paizo forums
Now this is the Law of the Jungle-
as old and as true as the sky;
And the Wolf that shall keep it may  prosper,
but the Wolf that shall break it must die.

-Rudyard Kipling, "The Law of the Jungle"
O&O

Devil's Advocate

OMG!  I love this game online!  So tempted to join/create a concept....  So very, very tempted....
O/o's

A/a's

The trouble with resisting temptation is that is may never come again!

VonDoom

#39
Though surely it runs counter to the very nature of an advocate, I then implore: mince no words and propose a character so that we wait no more.  >:) ;D

Well, that was terrible. Always nice to have more interest, on a more serious note. Welcome!
Now this is the Law of the Jungle-
as old and as true as the sky;
And the Wolf that shall keep it may  prosper,
but the Wolf that shall break it must die.

-Rudyard Kipling, "The Law of the Jungle"
O&O

Videospirit

Let's see what aspects we've seen so far.

Jo Libhaft, Wildcard Ex-militant
Trouble: Fearless and reckless
Feminine disarmament: Jo's extremely feminine appearance often misleads and disarms his opponents creating opportunities to strike or flee.

Wildcard is a fun word to have in your high concept. "fearless and reckless" is actually a bit tough to use, although it could actually help against something trying to paralyse you with fear, mostly it can be used to keep you from fleeing. I could see lots of "mistaken for a girl" event compels for feminine disarmament, which could be hilarious.

Acolyte Aishah Demel, Acolyte of the Thrice Blessed Goddess
Trouble: Speaking before thinking
Good conquers all
Goddess channels her magic through me
I am Pure Vessel

Your high concept is an interesting one, since those aspects aren't supposed to change, it'll be interesting to see how you stick with that despite everything corrupting you, maybe your goddess ends up being corrupted with you. Speaking before thinking is a hard one to compel by itself, since it in no way implies what exactly you will say, but if you combine it with your other aspects it can be a lot of fun, "You suddenly find yourself in the demons lair, he has mistaken you for a worshiper"*compels speak before thinking*

Marissa, Studious Witch Apprentice
Trouble: Curiosity killed corrupted the cat
Unharnessed Magic Potential

Studious could be fun, "You've heard stories of these creatures... the things they can do with their tongues send a pulse of heat to your loins".
Your trouble is amazing, so much potential, "You find yourself wondering what the liquid coming from the corrupted vine might taste like". Unharnessed Magic potential can also be used to justify basically anything*a spark jumps from your finger and the plants suddenly come to life... they're very friendly to you, intimately so*

Victor Blade, Crusading seeker
Trouble: My hatred for corruption and demons makes me self-righteous!
Iron Will: I have determination to succeed and accomplish a task where others would falter in devotion.

Your trouble is easy to use, Your iron will could be fun too abuse too "The succubus laughs and says you will never be able to resist her corruptive influence, you feel compelled to prove it to her".

Litek, Sturdy Blacksmith Apprentice
Trouble: Oh! Shiny Metal!
Gifted Molder of Metal

Your trouble is a lot of fun, not just for compels, but even in mid battle, "I pull out my magic artifact sword, I invoke Litek's Oh! Shiny Metal! for a +2 bonus to attack while he's distracted". I can't imagine a single situation where giften molder of metal could be used against you, unless you're proud about it.

Alex Stout, Former Knight Protector of the militant church
Trouble: Thinks with his loins
Truly believes women are weak and need to be protected
So gluttonous he's unstoppable when food is on the line

My character, don't want to spend too much time talking about my own work, but just think about what "Truly believes women are weak and need to be protected" would do to him if he gets turned into a woman.

Lilith, Flirty Alchemist's Apprentice
Trouble: Excessive Libido
Hiding Her? Cock

Not sure if Lilith is a man or a woman, kind of confused since she? has both breasts and a cock apparently? Anyway her trouble is similar to Alex's but it's even worse. It's nearly as bad as something like "Addicted to minotaur cum" for how easy it is to invoke. It could be useful for situations where sexual stamina is important though, "I invoke my excessive Libido, I'm always up for another round of sex" Hiding her cock is mostly an event compel target I think. Could be used in other situations, "The rich lady invites you to join her in the baths, you feel compelled to excuse yourself, no matter if you have to offend her, lest she discovers your cock." Flirty is a fun one on your High Concept as Well. "The fey only has power over you if you respond to him, he complements your ass, you feel compelled to flirt back."

Anton Ramondu, Swashbuckling Rogue
Trouble: Impulsive, he will often leap into a situation before he realizes how hard it will be to get out alive, or uncorrupted.
Seducer of Women: Anton has been a womanizer since he found out that they have different parts. As such, he is experienced in the wooing of ladies.

Your Trouble is basically Jo's trouble, but without the fearless aspect so it can't even be used to avoid crapping your pants. Your seducer of Women is like Alex and Lilith's trouble because of the womanizer tag, but it can also be invoked to give you a bonus at seducing women. Both aspects are pretty great.

eBadger

Good analysis, I think I generally agree.  I do have a bit of concern that a couple aspects are a bit vague, so we'll see what happens there but they can always be tweaked as we move along.  Some very good Troubles that are going to be getting you lot into plenty of difficulty :)

And as mentioned, aspects (whether Troubles, High Concepts, or other aspects) that can be used against you aren't a bad thing: it's your primary source of Fate points to power all your other awesomeness. 

VonDoom

I wouldn't worry too much - the vagueness should also be informed by the background/personality, since we're doing a more detailed character creation than standard FAE. For example, my own 'Unharnessed Magic Potential' is definitely one of the more vague ones, but Marissa's background specifies that she doesn't actually know anything about magic and never learned to use her potential properly. Her Stunt is the only thing she can do with it on purpose and reliably and even that's basically just emitting some raw energy. She might respond instinctively in an appropriate situation, but even then it'd be a raw, basic and potentially dangerous thing. And still always in concordance with the GM agreeing that it's appropriate.

For Fate, being sensible and communicating is part of how things are done. I've been part of MUSH places that consisted of freeform and consent-based rules where you had to formulate everything to basically account for and prevent every potential possibility of abuse, but Fate is in the exact opposite place, I think: cooperation and trust to want to do something fun together. That's a big part of what I like about it. Sorry, I'm starting to ramble again, but -- does that make any sense?
Now this is the Law of the Jungle-
as old and as true as the sky;
And the Wolf that shall keep it may  prosper,
but the Wolf that shall break it must die.

-Rudyard Kipling, "The Law of the Jungle"
O&O

Hexed

Alright! Finally got off my ass and finished my character application. Just edited my old post but if it's needed I can make a new one. :D

As for Gifted Molder of Metal. Well ego or not he will/should poke and prod at anything new, so I'd imagine he could get in quite a bit of trouble although that kinda falls under the Oh! Shiny Metal! bit. And just because he can fix/make something doesn't mean he should.

Re Z L

#44
Alastríona Clíona


High Concept:  Blade-wielding monster hunter

Trouble:  My lust for strength goes unchecked

Aspects:

  • I will never be a victim
  • Too clever for my own good
  • An infinitely mutable adaptable Human

Approaches:

  • Careful:  +0
  • Clever:  +3
  • Flashy:  +1
  • Forceful:  +2
  • Quick:  +2
  • Sneaky:  +1

Stunts:

  • Monster Hunter:  Because I am skilled at fighting monsters, I get a +2 when I Cleverly create advantages when I look for the creature's weak spot.

Fate Points:
Current 3
Refresh 3


Appearance:

  • Sex:  Female
  • Build:  Athletic
  • Height:  5' 8"
  • Skin Tone:  Olive
  • Hair Color:  Auburn
  • Eye Color:  Hazel
  • Breast Size:  C-cup

Personality:
Clever but headstrong with a fiery disposition.  She is not one to let a challenge go unanswered, nor turn down the chance

Biography:
Born to a small family in a small town, though the town had a few more secrets than a young child could know.  However, to know of the woman was to know of the city.  A portal to another world was hidden near the town, and it reeked of mystic corruption.  The elders of the city knew of it, but kept it's presence hidden from the rest of the citizens.  Monsters would sneak through from whatever fell place was on the other side of the portal from time to time, they would sneak out into the surrounding wilds or infrequently into the village.  For this reason a special group of "monster hunters" rose up to defend the town from the tainted creatures.  It was one such encounter that catalyzed Alastriona's journey to adulthood.

One of the demons had snuck into the village and wove some corruptive influence over a handful of men.  Their lust was lit aflame and they began to nearly stalk through the town looking for a victim.  Alastriona was just blossoming into womanhood and had the misfortune of crossing their path while journeying home late one night.  She fought them off as best she could but it wasn't until someone had come to her aid--with half of her clothes already ripped asunder--that she was saved.  So scarred by the event she vowed to herself that she would never be so weak to be unable to defend herself again.  She would never again allow anyone to make her into a victim.

Despite her partially selfish motivations she became well suited to swordplay and in time became one of the town's monster hunters.  By serving the city and becoming one of the preeminent defenders of the citizens she was eventually called to the Elders who explained the truth behind the monsters, and that they were planning to send her into it to defend the town from the other side.

Prologue:
It wasn't until one of the town elders was returned from the other side of the portal, disfigured and exhausted that they realized what the position they were in really was.  A message was pinned to his shirt that said that the raiding would only escalate unless they met their demands.  They were to send forth a "sacrifice" through the portal once a year and in return they would stop venturing forth through the portal to harrass the town.  This left them in a peculiar predicament, they could send someone but they had no guarantee that the beings on the other side of the portal would uphold their end of the bargain.  They concluded then that they would have to come up with a more proactive plan.

Alastriona had become one of their most skilled hunters of late, and they concluded that she would be the one that had the best chance to fight them back to their leader and hopefully keep them from ever bothering the town again.

"So I'm tae fight them on their homestead," she asked in a nonplussed tone.

"Aye, 'tis the only way," they assured her, though they had told only half of the truth.

"On me own, in an unknown world, infested by tha monsters we been fightin'," she seemed to be considering the idea more than pointing out the flaws in sending one person to fight back a potential horde.  "I guess it was meant tae be then," she concluded with a grim smirk, "how much time do I get afore the journey?"

"Tonight," the answer came with a calm solemnity from the elders, "and we must ask that you don't explain the details to the other citizens...we don't want to start a panic."

"Nothin' tae worry 'bout with tha," she reassured them, "got a couple fare-thee-wells tae say an' a few things tae pack--I'll see ye tonight."

Sexual Background/Preferences:
Bisexual.

Ons & Offs:
Generally I'm open for most things, except some of the typical offs (bathroom-play, etc.).  Just check with me beforehand if you think it's really off-the-wall.

Here's some of the scenes I enjoyed from CoC:

  • Dominika's scenes
  • Female losing scene to the succubus in the Factory
  • Corrupting Amily
  • Corrupting Marae

Quote:
"Tch, is that the best you can do?"
A&A

Datawych

It looks like you've already got plenty of players (and I'm always a little hesitant to participate in large group games, as they're often unwieldy), but I'm interested if you ever need more players/need replacements.

Devil's Advocate

Name: Mousen (nickname Mouse)
Sex: Male
Build: Slender
Height 5'7
Skin tone: pale
Hair color: blond, shoulder length, long bangs that have a tendency to fall in his eyes
Eye color: blue
Cock size: on the small side of average when fully erect but thicker than average.
Beard: usually stubble

Appearance

Mouse looks nearly as his nickname.  He is of slight build and prefers to stay to the shadows and out of sight.  He pale skin, which is apt to burn on a sunny day and light blond hair often make him look to others as if he is nearly a ghost or wraith of a human being.  His blue eyes are sensitive to the light but appear to be great pools of water, soaking in everything that they can see.  He has thin but dexterous fingers that seem to be geared toward fine, detailed work.

He speaks in a high pitched, yet soft voice.

Personality

Mousen, has become known as Mouse due to his quiet and often skittish personality.  Mouse is extremely studious and likes to think before making a decision.  He also tends to be observant, trying to find ways to avoid conflict whenever possible.  However, he does have a weakness for finer material goods in life.  Like a crow, if it is shiny, he likely wants it.  However, unlike a crow, he will only take what he perceives to be valuable.  Because of his background, see below, he also is highly penitent  for his thieving qualities and will often talk to his God, asking for forgiveness or absolution for his knowingly, wrongful actions.

Background

Mouse grew up in an urban environment.  His parents were both dead by the time that he was eight and he was left to fend for himself on the harsh streets of Casmoor.  Since he was small and unfit for manual labor, he quickly learned that his method of survival would be by thievery.  He never viewed thieving as wrong.  He viewed it as necessary, at least, until he was caught.

Like any common criminal in Casmoor, once caught, his doom was sealed.  He was to be killed.  Fate, however, intervened.  At the boy's trial, a priest by the name of Valen begged for the boy to be paroled into his care.  He argued that Mouse had worth and that the great God, Salmun-Ka, sought redemption for this boy.  He would be trained as an initiate and prepared for a more honorable life in society. 

After the exchange of several coins, Valen won his prize and Mouse was given to him.  Mouse was set to studying and learning the rules and obligations of the priesthood.  However, as much as Mouse tried to obey, he still found himself taking nightly walks and returning to the House of Salmun-Ka a bit wealthier.  Of course, as penance, the baubles had to be forfeited to the church.  And for reasons unknown to Mouse, Valen never rejected Mouse, stopped his nightly walks, or turned him in to be killed.  After all, a holy man should not and would not normally encourage such behavior.

Writing Sample/Prologue

Mouse had overslept once again, this time completely missing morning prayers.  He only knew this by looking outside his window and seeing that the sun was well beyond the dawn.  Usually, he would be rebuked for missing morning prayers and likely lose some privileges but this day was different.  For some reason, nobody came to do so on this day. 

He dressed quickly in his priestly robes, hoping that he could make his way to breakfast and lose himself in the crowd. Perhaps he was thought to have been there earlier in the day.  He looked up at the sky and whispered, "Salmun-Ka, I humbly beg your forgiveness, though you know that I am not worthy.  I do try my best to serve your needs but if it is your needs that I serve, why is that I have desires that are against your teachings?  Do you constantly test me?  I must go now.  We will have this discussion later.  Forgive me."

Rushing himself, but staying in the shadows, he silently walked the corridors of the temple.  As he closed in on the dining hall, he could hear the sounds of jubilant celebration.  Silently, he thanked Salmun-Ka for creating a scene that was raucous enough that he would likely slip in unnoticed.  Unfortunately, after taking one step, Valen stepped around the corner and placed his hand on Mouse's shoulder with a great smile.  All that Mouse could wonder about was the smile.  This was not the proper or normal response for missing the morning prayers.

Mouse shrank back from the grip on his shoulders but found himself unable.  Valen smiled wider and said, "My dear boy, the day has come for you to fulfill your destiny!"

"My destiny?  You saved me to teach me of Salmun-Ka."

"Indeed, I did.  And you are given his blessing.  This celebration is for you."

"F-for, uh, me?  Why?"

"Because, as I foresaw many years ago, you would be our Champion.  You will save us from the demons and the corruption that tries to invade our land?"

"Me?"  He glanced at Valen wide-eyed.  "I do not understand.  I am hardly worthy of such a task."

"Nonsense, said Valen.  In fact, you may be the most qualified Champion we have ever had, though none have returned to date."

Mouse tried to scamper away but he found that he was prevented from doing so as two armed men came up from behind him.  "I do not see anything that makes me qualified."

"It is simple.  You have been touched with some corruption.  You are a thief and an excellent one.  However, you serve Salmun-Ka.  We believe that our previous priests were too pure to go to the corrupted realms and failed.  You, however, may be able to do what they could not.  You must go to Mareth, purge the corruption from there and save our city."  He then nodded to the guards holding Mouse.  "Of course, to refuse would certainly lead down a path you were saved from many years ago by myself.  I would hate to think that I wasted the church's funds...."

Mouse now understood.  He was raised in the church to prevent them losing someone more valuable.  His choices were certain death or almost certain death.  Given that he had a desire to live, almost certain death sounded much more pleasant.  "I see.  Then, I shall honor Salmun-Ka as I have promised."

Valen smiled and the armed guards relaxed.  "Wonderful!  After the celebration, you will be prepared.  You will be given some supplies and then you will go through the portal.  Salmun-Ka will guide you."


Ons/Offs
This is CoC.  I'm more than fine with anything in this genre.

Character Sheet: 

High Concept
Penitent, Wiley Thief
Trouble
Will risk much for fancy gems
Aspects
Constantly talks to himself/Salmun-Ka aloud when alone
Human
Approaches
Careful+1
Clever+2
Flashy+1
Forceful+0
Quick +2
Sneaky +3

Fate Points
3 Refresh

Stunts
Because I am pale, smaller and quiet thief with nimble fingers, I gain a +2 to sneaky when trying to hide or use thieving skills in the evening.
O/o's

A/a's

The trouble with resisting temptation is that is may never come again!

Vercile

#47
I've linked my WIP character so far to Ebadger and VonDoom and I'm getting mixed feedback. So, if either of you could let me know what the go is?

Character - WIP

Character Sheet:

High Concept: Bow-Wielding Light Mage

Trouble: Pervert Magnet

Aspects:

Of Human Kind
Virtuous and Pure of Heart

Approaches:
   
Quick +3
Careful +2
Flashy +2
Clever +1
Sneaky +1
Forceful +0

Fate Points: 3

Refresh: 3

Stunts:

Because I am Used to Dodging People Trying to Grope Me, I get a +2 when I Quickly defend against attacks in close combat.

Because I can do Trick Shots, I get a +2 when Flashily attacking at range.

Character Description:

Name: Elwyn Ainsborough
Sex: Female
Build: Slender, Girly & Curvy
Height: 5'4" (Slightly taller in heels)
Skin tone: Pale & Unblemished
Hair color: A golden blonde with gentle waves and length to her lower back
Beard: Not Applicable
Breast Size: Large (D-cup), Soft & Supple

Appearance


Personality


Background


Writing Sample/Prologue


Ons/Offs


Devil's Advocate

Quote from: VonDoom on April 13, 2015, 07:44:00 AM
Though surely it runs counter to the very nature of an advocate, I then implore: mince no words and propose a character so that we wait no more.  >:) ;D

Well, that was terrible. Always nice to have more interest, on a more serious note. Welcome!

BTW, that was terrible but you are forgiven for coming up with this concept game.  My concept, though not completely CoC ish is above.  :)
O/o's

A/a's

The trouble with resisting temptation is that is may never come again!

eBadger

Quote from: Datawych on April 13, 2015, 10:11:13 PM
It looks like you've already got plenty of players (and I'm always a little hesitant to participate in large group games, as they're often unwieldy), but I'm interested if you ever need more players/need replacements.

This isn't first come, first serve, and won't be a huge game, so I encourage you to fill out a character now if you're interested. 

On that note, though, I'm ending the application period tomorrow night. 

Quote from: Vercile on April 13, 2015, 10:27:39 PM
I've linked my WIP character so far to Ebadger and VonDoom and I'm getting mixed feedback. So, if either of you could let me know what the go is?

What sort of mixed feedback?  What I saw looked good, but there was no personality/background/story information to give it any form.  So finish that and submit it asap :)  I *do* intend to limit starting with magic, but I'm open to a bit with a good/interesting concept.