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Victorian

Hi, I am new here, but I have Rp'd for a long time on BMR and came here to find a new experience.

Please read my first post all the way through. I know it is long, but it will serve two purposes: it will let you get to know me as a writer and if you read it all the way through I will know you are serious about being on here.

About me:  I am a long term roleplayer who does 300-500 word posts and will post 1-3X per week. I have written a myriad of Rp's and think that most of the people I have written with have had a positive and pleasurable experience. If you are just a dilettante please don't bother. If you don't have a somewhat complete grasp of the English language, it probably won't work out either. I expect as good as I get and find that only through doing this will both parties have an enjoyable experience.  Also, I am not a picture guy; I paint visual in my head with words and hopefully convey them to you.

I am here primarily to work with amazing writers and am searching for creativity and not just smut.

Some don'ts
I dont' want to own you
I don't want to do violent things that lead in death unless it follows closely with a plot we have
I don't want to break the law (well, I will break the law to move the plot forward, but you had better be over 18 and preferably over 21)
I don't want a puppy/furry thing/toilet play
I am not self obsessed with popular culture and being perfect
I will write with males, but please identify yourself as such and have a great idea

Or as the songwriter said "perfectly crafted hit songs never use the wrong line, I wish that waitress would get my order right the first time"

So here goes:
I simply adore females who can write well and become their character (usually in the third person). Lets face it, that makes you sexy as hell and someone I want to write with.

My mind and creativity try to create something new and unique. I am not up on the latest television shows. If you want to do a "Game of Thrones", I will try it but I am a season behind. If you want historical fiction with a modicum of authenticity, then I am.  Said another way "canons are not my thing".

My sense of humor is dry and tends towards the absurd.. Think british humor (humour) and you will get me. Karl Marx said it best when he said "history repeats itself, first as tragedy and second as farce". We can all find things to laugh at in life.

I will always try to treat you with respect, just face it, sometimes we bore the hell out of each other. If that happens, we can just have an amicable parting of ways.

If we were dancing, I would follow your lead. I used to smile when I saw people say "I can only respond appropriately to what I am given" and it is so true. If you give me a line, probably the most I can give you is two lines back. I don't want "War and Peace" out of you, but I want a thoughtful response. Further, I always try to push the plot forward. It is a great strength and my greatest weakness, you have to be strong when you write with me and your character has to be even stronger and "yes" you can be a strong submissive.

My writing will always try to drive the plot forward. It will be about an 80/20 mix of plot to smut. If you come up with a topic, I will try to research it before posting.

I am about details. What color were the eyes? What was she thinking when she did that? Why was it raining? How did she react when MC slipped the handcuffs on her fiercely independent wrists? That is what will set our roleplay apart. I find my best roleplays are about power struggles. I don't want a submissive "milquetoast" to write with, I want a thinking, writing and acting female who has a different set of objectives from MC.

Finally, one thing that I have learned on here is that I am open to feedback. Please provide it and help me to be a better writer, I will try to do the same. I also enjoy the back and forth of OOC comments - again, flirting is sexy.

At the end of the day, I WANT to come on here and see a super fantastic post to a roleplay. One that is interactive and is told from two points of view. .

Lets talk about roleplays ideas:
1) MC is a detective in the victorian era (think Sherlock Holmes, but an American) and YC has a case that needs solving. I did this once and really liked it, but then it went south. I would like to try it again.

2) Headed for a new space colony assignment, MC needs someone who can communicate with the natives. The colony is essential for the ore's that come back to earth and must be kept up and running at all costs. Never got past the first post on this one.

3) You pay MC to kidnap you so YC can collect the ransom from your father....doesn't quite turn out like you wanted.

4) Lewis and Clark discover America, only it is 5 years before and we could be on an ill fated expedition. YC is a native American princess who wants to help or a cruel sadistic domme who wants to wreck the voyage.

5) YC went away on a holiday. Young and on vacation you decided to visit a 3rd world country because it was "cool and edgy". Perhaps more than you bargained for....

6) Vikings but more the Bernard Cornwall "Saxon Tales" than the TV show (although to be historically accurate it should be 'Norsemen')

7) MC is a charismatic cult leader, YC is sent in either to infiltrate the cult to save someone or to bring it down.

8) Of course you have to include YC is a superheroine and mine is a misunderstood villain (you know, just like in prison no one was ever guilty of their crime). A bit less "maturity" in this one,

9) C is a detective, you know....an alcoholic gone to seed guy who had 'been there and done that'. YC is a serial killer who decides to play games with him.

10) YC is a young woman new to a large city that wants to experience it all. MC is a dominant who will lead her along in the lifestyle. She goes willing, maybe all too willingly? I have tried this a few times. It gets to be 50 shades very quickly.

11) My character is a true dominant. None of this 50 shades. YC is well, we can work on that. MC is an older, richer dominant who wants a submissive. He meets YC and slowly breaks her, molding her into his idea of the perfect female. Could involve operations, dinners, parties, but all in a current day and real life feel and vibe. Nothing evil, just an exploration of submission. YC can be either male or female, but you have to get the nuances down. It has to feel original. I don't want a desperate "saddo" who falls into my clutches for money, or ability to drive the role play forward. If you want to know more, contact me.

12) I am a fairly famous artist that words in oils and canvas. While YC is at an exhibit she sees something in my paintings (clues to a murder and she is a detective, religious iconography that relates to evil, something ???) that only she can see. When she says to the person next to her "do you see that?" they simply reply "no". Anyway she needs MC to solve a crime or explain something and he takes her down a road (either good or evil).

13) I live on a house on the hill. You are a down on your luck (possible mother) who is looking for a cheap place to stay. You see an add for a "let" in my house(Craig's list, internet, etc) and the rent is too good to pass up. The only stipulation is that YC must meet with my character every Monday from 7PM to 9PM on Monday's to talk literature (and possibly more). Think of this as a sexy Pygmalion.

14) It is 1917. We are in St. Petersburg Russia living the grand life. MC is a prince for the Tsar and head of his internal security. YC is an assassin, princess, ????. Calamity awaits all as the Russian revolution is about to begin. Do we have a romance? Murder? Plot? Intrigue? Could make for a great story.

15) YC is a hacker. I mean you are the bomb. No place you can't get into and no information you can't get. You are known far and wide as the best of the best when a shadowy message come for you to break into MC's companies website. Virtual reality doesn't really exist now? You get caught in firewalls and YC becomes an icon on the screen for MC to put into perilous situations. Still thinking this one through and am more than happy to entertain your ideas.

16) Lets not forget the tried and true "MC is a bounty hunter and YC is the bounty". Let the hijinks ensure. Could be any time period and you can be any character (within my limits).

17) It is a masquerade costume party. All the cities hip and most stylish people are at the private club for THE event. The goal is to find your significant other before the night is out and pair off with him. YC dresses and acts how she pleases, MC is who you think you should be after. An erotic evening ensues? There will be BDSM in this rp, although I would like to stay away from the horror.

but hey.........

18) A game of desperation. YC needs money and she needs money quickly. She agrees to enter a labyrinth with the understanding that if she makes it through, riches await her. Well, the paperwork is endless and MC's lawyers dot every I and cross every T. Perhaps YC got more than she bargained for........

19) MC is an accomplished burglar. If you want something rare and unique, he is the guy you go to outside of legal circles. He is very exclusive and you can play this one of two ways. YC hires him to steal a famous painting that you can't pay for and you deal with the repercussions or YC is in the house when he breaks in.

20) You are a model. Nothing too high end (don't think the Ford Agency), but you do regional stuff. Catalogues and fashion magazines. MC wants to kidnap you. Very basic and simple plot that could make a great LT RP if done right.

21) MC has learned how to enter YC dreams. We would take it from there.

22) MC is a drug dealer and YC is an addict.

23) We had a very intense bdsm relationship 4 years ago. So intense, you fled away from it as the loss of control and submission was simply too much. After all, you were raised to NOT be that kind of girl. Now 4 years later you are married and in a very stale and boring relationship when you decide to look me up again, or maybe we meet serendipitously.

24) MC is the owner of a carnival of freak shows. He is always looking for the new and different - something to put his show "over the top" and "make it a MUST SEE". Nothing is out of bounds, be it exotic or kinky or just death defying. YC is the latest show in town to want to be on the 'greatest show on earth'. Your act is?

25) MC is a therapist hired to help you resolve your issues. Either in prison or YC experienced some sort of trauma that needs counseling. Perhaps I am even paid to spank you for punishment for your sins. Many places to take this from simply chatting to I provide the sexual fulfillment to YC's kinks.

26) Click for a clique? (Or the Dr. is in) There have always been groups we have always wanted to belong too. Whether they were richer, cooler, heck they could even be better read and we wanted the affirmation that came with belong to the “In” crowd. Well, MC is a Dr. who specializes in that. After a few short analysis sessions he can put a chip/circuit/reprogram YC to be the person she always wanted to be. A Chanel toting lovely? A disco biscuit? A future……. We can go lots of ways with this. Oh! I almost forgot. The price…………..tbd.

27) Party like it is (20)99! So the Earth is coming to an end. A meteoroid is blasting full tilt and there are only days until who knows what will happen? Anyway, the earth has a limited number of ships that they are planning to blast out to space to keep the population alive. Most of the ships are staffed with specialists, but a lottery has been held for a few ship. YC has won a spot! It is a small transport that holds two people. YC and MC who have to shoot out to space and then?

28) Shut up and die like an aviator (aviatrix). So the interplanetary wars are in full swing and Earth has sent a “volunteer force” to aid Empire. There is a rebel stronghold that has been deemed impregnable, unless a fighter can get through. YC has been selected based on her quickness, intelligence, agility and the fact that the Empire wants humans to start dying in combat, it will make the rebels appear even more vile. Many ways to go with this, but I see your plane getting shot down on the rebel stronghold after a little build up.


29) This is set slightly in the future. YC wants to take some time off to refocus and take a vacation. Virtual Stimulators are all the rage and for the small price of $12,000 you can come and react to any fantasy you desire. This would be a Rp within a Rp as MC's corporation may not be all it seems, or we can simply act out the fantasy.

30) The Flower Wars. The Azteks had ritualistic fighting where they would fight the other side and their warriors became very good at singling out opponents, binding them and then passing them back along their lines to be sacrificed at big holidays. Your tribe has just lost and you are to be sacrificed to appease the Azteks.

31) Lets talk this. MC is a complete and total cad. YC is a private detective who is paid very well to "out" him. A big bonus awaits if you can seduce him and tape him.

32) I play a Superhero. Nothing too fantastic, but I do rely on technology. It will be an original and you are an evil does bent on conquering the world/robbing a bank or just plain seducing MC. because yeah, that is what evil doers do.

33) Anything historical. Please be versed in history (real history).

34) It is the middle ages and my country has been defeated. I have to go to the opposition Queen and negotiate a peace treaty. Two strong minds where YC holds all the cards.

35) So here is a new idea. YC is a news reporter. She does special investigations and has broken stories of serial killers in the region. She is popular and much watched, this close (holding my thumb close to my forefinger) from going national. However (you knew it was coming!).............she just put the last public serial killer behind bars.


How does she get to go national? By finding a new serial killer to investigate! Send a note for more information.

36) The local community college is offering a photography class at night. The professor is semi-famous around town for pushing the envelope. MC is taking the class so he can get better at photography. YC ??? - maybe she needs the 'art' credits or it is her passion. Anyway, we end up together on an assignment. It is a BDSM shoot. More to follow.

Added:  November 17

37) YC is a spy. She can either do it out of loyalty to country or money. I will play two C's. The first would be your controller. He works with you to give you your mission and what you need to access. The other C I would play would be the head of security for either the country you are in or the company you are hacking. We take it from there.

38) War in a dystopian future. You are either a rebel or you hate the government. Perhaps a spy or assassin but I like the idea of YC being in the military and taken prisoner. Lets see how far we can take the veneer before she breaks.

39) A woman who gets paid by a rival CEO/ex/Foreign government to break me. She has to be good and cold (frosty). Would like to see where this goes.

40) What if someone famous moved in near you? He could be a former actor in the porn industry with a signature move or a disgraced politician with a fondness for younger women or maybe a mob figure who got off? He doesn't talk and there is no evidence, but....you.....have....seen.......that.............face.........before.

41) This is dark. There is an internet site from another internet site. Supposedly the money is fantastic but you have to meet in real life and there is hardcore bdsm on a pay channel. All very secretive and no one on the connecting site has known anyone to return or go. "is this an urban legend?" MC would be the guide for the site.

42) This is something that I did recently that was fun. It is called "who are you" in which you just send me a post of 2-3 para's and I respond. There is no plotting and no communication beforehand. Based on the response it becomes a fast paced Rp that no one knows where it will take us. You have to be literate for this one as I will lay traps and play with YC to my hearts content. Just send it, I will write back if I am not going to reply.....but I probably am.

43. YC likes porn. She watches it when she is not at work and one day she watches a "snuff" video. It is so real, the beautiful young black girl, tied up with the older white male monster over her. Her screams. Her eyes. Her emotions. The movie ends and YC thinks that is real. You watch the end credits to find it was done by "RIM Productions".......there is a RIM Productions sign in an office building right near your house. You call the police to confirm and "yes" it is the same.

You tell them you want to report a murder and they laugh at you. What happens next?

44. This has become one of my favorites and is stolen from one of my friends.....Lastly, a little something I call Who Are You? No OOC planning or deciding what we'd like to explore. Just send me your open. We're only allowed to describe characters/setting within the game. No "how do you feel about" or "we should set this in/on." Just let the words flow. Let it happen. Works best with very literate writers.

45) YC is a call girl. One night you get called up for a one night stand at a mansion. The sex is kinky (your kinks) and YC likes it, however what really intrigues you is the wealth involved. YC goes home the next morning and tell your pimp (or others) and you decide to rob the place. YC would be the call girl and possibly pimp. MC would be the owner and others. Open to the endings.

Added December 17.

  46)  There are four kingdoms and you are a Queen/Princess in one of them.  I am fleeing from another of the Kingdoms and my body is carved with runes from an old dead language that could be the key to unlocking magic.  Do you take me in even if it risks war with your larger rival.  I see this as a long term Rp with many characters and parts.

47)  A magician and his assistant.  Lets see where this one goes?

New as of December, 2017.
  48)  Something around the Sailor Moon series.  One thing is for sure is that the filmmakers from Japan sure know strange.  YC's are the 5 Sailor Moons and they are abducted, defeated by my alien Trans Character.  Could be campy fun where we see where the writing takes us.

49)  The empire in decline.  MC is a  ruler/business person who has slowly gotten over extended.  Does YC take him out while he is down or is she a friend in need?

50)  Harlem in the 1920's.  MC is a White singer trying to make it in the Jazz age.  He knows he has to make it Harlem and will do anything to get the chance.  YC is a fellow singer and we take it from there.



I am up to xx  47. Well done me.


Victorian

#1
Due to circumstances......



Contact me for details.  I sincerely doubt you will regret it.

Victorian

I am back and playing on here.  Taking requests.

Victorian

#3
Lets move this to the top.  I am really only looking for 1 more.  Some more ideas.....


Victorian

Looking to see what happens over the weekend.

Hotomidemon1

Hey I realized you have quite an imagination here
I would not mind take up a few ideas with you and who knows jump straight into one
I think 11 to 13 will be good
However I must admit I do tend to throw quite a twist to any story if you're up to it let me know and we can go from there
<3 <3
beautiful nightmare

playfullchick76

Hi, I spotted your viking one. I'm a fan of the show vikings, of course, but I'm willing to play it out a bit differently than in the show if you prefer. If you do want to hear my idea, let me know.

Victorian

Bumping to the top.  Please send me a PM if you are interested.

Victorian


Victorian

#9
Pretty full up.  If something is brilliant or appeals to me as a writer, I will reply.  If you do come to me; please be ready to provide a first post.  You don't "love my idea" and then have nothing to add.  I am good, but I can't carry that forward.

Victorian

Updated with image.  I am getting the hang of this.

Victorian

#11
I have 5.  Maybe 1 more.  Again, I am full up.  I also have a few people I need to get started with.  I apologize for pulling back on this, but I am full up.

Victorian

This is something I did that was new to me.  It was first person and I thought a credible good first post.  There was not a reply.  MC's would be the Norseman and the Celt searching for his beloved.

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My name is Erik and I pray to Odin.  War was in my blood since I was a child and I was raised to live by the sword and die by the sword.  I refuse to cut my long blonde hair as it would offend the Gods so I am over 6’ tall and my strength is a source of endless delight to me.  At wedding ceremonies, when the mead flows I have people punch at my stomach and simply laugh at them when I don’t flinch and reply “my turn”.  But as my mother told me I have one weakness and that is vanity.

Vanity got me discarded from Daneland.  A civil war where I openly mocked the King, only I should have done a better job of choosing sides, for when the war ended I had been banished from the land and sent west. 

My crew to a man went with me and we took to plundering.  It is an honest profession really.  We go up and down the coast of a place called “Wessex” taking booty, for indeed Wessex is a land of milk and honey.  The animals are fattened, the men are cowards and the women like to fuk.  Well, I imagine they like it, but their opinion is not asked from them in that regard.

I drink, I fight, I am covered with war tattoo’s and the coward christian king Arthur and his lieutenant want me dead and have a price put on my head.  My own king wants me dead and puts a price on my head and to the east in Bretagne where the King there wants me dead and has a price on my head.  This seems to be a recurring theme in my life.

So I raid.  My longboats with the dragon on their bow appear out of nowhere.  We ride in with the fog and Wessex is so profitable that there is always plunder.

The christian tower we saw today indicated another town ripe for plunder.  We came in, my sword arm on “wessex tamer” and we quickly sent the militia scurrying away.  Going to the nicest thatch hut I set in ablaze when…………

A man.  No a boy really came running at me with a blade yelling “nooooooo” and tried to stab me – me Erik! Through with it.  He missed and I kicked him hard first in the stomach until he went down and then in the face.  He went to the fetal position and laid there sobbing something about his “most precious and beloved.”  I didn’t have the time to run him through but I wondered what his “most precious and beloved” was.

I think he must have been referring to the blonde woman inside the hut.  Shivering with fear she had tried to hide, but I have a sense for the female scent and soon found her.  I dragged her out by her hair and a horse supplied, I rode back to the beach and the boat with her as my soul bounty.  My hand on her shapely and full ass the whole while, my hardness running into her breasts, she surely knew what fate had in store for her.

Oh, how she kicked and scream.  This one was a little Harpy!  And now she lays beside me in my bearcloth, crying over her lost home as we have set sail again, as I wonder what price I will get for her.

Victorian


Victorian


Victorian

Added 3 new ones.  Happy Holidays everyone!

playfullchick76


Victorian

#17
A few new ideas for the new year.

MC has been a serial killer who has been locked away in a maximum security insane asylum.  The only problem is that there is a copycat out there now and YC is either a cop/therapies who has to interview him to get to the killer.  We could take the actual form the asylum out into the city as you try to interview my first C for clues and try to capture the other killer before he strikes again.

It does sound a little clichéd, but if we do it right; it can be original.




A space odyssey.  A new drug has been discovered on a far off planet.  It is instantly addictive and has been banned by the Confederation.  For cooking it requires an Ore (xx2) only available on 1 outpost.  The outpost has a few miners (grandfathered in from the law) as well as a saloon and refueling station.  MC has been appointed Sherriff of this desolate and lonely outpost.  My only companion an android deputy.  We take it from there.

I wish everyone the best in the new year ahead.

Victorian

#18
Some new data.

I like Rp's to end.  I try to get to about 100 posts, around 50 for each of these and then I want them to end.  Why?

1.  This is a great stopping point.
2.  As PT Barnum said "always leave them wanting more.
3.  It gives my partner an out.  Instead of just not replying, there is light at the end of the tunnel.

So why write with me then?

Below is something I was inspired to write that will come at my writing partners fast and furious.  Hope you enjoy.  This is a dark opening and not for the feint of heart.  If you want romance and hugs, buy a cat and name him "cuddles".






They say the rich are unlike you and I and let me tell you they are.  They are dumber and more stupid.  The mistakes they make seem like huge blunders compared to what we do, but the money comes out and everything gets swept under the rug.  The story I am going to relate to you is just a prime example of what actually happened.



2024 – The United States

William Starr was a polarizing figure.  Good looking, incredibly wealthy and he had the hottest wife in what could be the world.  He moved through life with the greatest of ease with a pearly white smile and a firm handshake.  He made you feel good about yourself while he was fucking you six ways to Sunday and it was even thought that he would be President someday.  He had the wife that wowed everyone.  Her name was Amy Starr and she flirted with the best.  She came when he was glad handing, and her smile and giggle and look made him bulletproof.  The handsome Senator with the beautiful wife.  He was the American success story and all he needed now was the issue.  The issue was about to be very clear to him.

The issue was one of racial purity.  “100% American and two generations in this country or you go back to where you came from.”  He didn’t mean that of course.  What he meant was that if you were 100% pure, you lived a good life in gated communities and if you didn’t, you lost all benefits of being an “American” and were sent to the slave marts.  The rich shopped the slave marts for laborers, whether to clean their house, work on their planes or grow their gardens.  If you had a kink and were pure, you bought a slave and worked on your fetish with him or her until you moved on to the next thing.  Slaves were cheap, work was dirty and eventually you died.

So imagine Senator Starr’s amazement when he received an email one Saturday night two days before the election with him up 53-47% in the polls from an anonymous source that was untraceable.  The note simply said:

“Amy is not racially pure and we can prove it.  How would your electorate like to know you married a mongrel?  Our polling has you losing 45-55% to the liberal woman from your state.”

The note had a file attached.  It was a medical record that showed Amy to be impure within 8 years and in fact to be ordered out of the country if the Border Patrol found out.

The note continued “if you reply, we will let you win your election Senator Starr.  In return on the night of Sunday, November 8th, you will feed Amy a sleeping pill in her drink, you will turn off the security system cameras sounds and digital, you will give us the codes to both the community and your gate and you will leave for a fundraiser.  If your wife is not found in her bed, the news gets leaked.  This is two days before the election and the shock and awe will cost you your Senate seat.  Hit reply that we are okay to do this.”

The Senator read this open mouthed.  Amy had been a good wife.  Sure there was a 20 year gap in age, but the lips and the smile….god he loved fucking her, but he liked winning elections even more.

But, an election is still an election.  He opened the medical report and then replied.

“Yes, you can have my wife.  I will even leave the side door unlocked.”


Victorian

I want to write a superheroine story.  Perhaps going into Japanese Ryona themes and Shibari, but not a deal breaker if we don't.

You play a series of superheroines,  all know by the color of the uniform they wear....Miss Orange, Miss Red, Miss Green.  They are in the League of Superheroines (from 4-6).

I play an arch-villain who takes them one by one.  We play them out 1x1 with MC and the overall theme of the story.  We go where the writing takes us.


Victorian

It is that time when you rely on the "art" more than the "science".  I think a few Rp's might be ending, so like spring, let the flowers (or writers) bloom anew.

Here are some new ideas.  This one can be for any sex.  YC is bad.  We have a build up and it is either at work, or at a bar, or college and they think they are being kinky, or desiring of attention.

We either play it out over postings or it happens that they are bad to the wrong person.  Non-consensually they wake up with a sex change (could take time to write).  They then have to go out into the world and encounter lovers, friends, parents as a different sex.  They can either try to hide it or not, but we play it out.

Also, willing to discuss any of my other requests other than the "50 Shades".  I am currently doing that in a number of versions and it is not appealing to me at this time.